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Skill companion · Year 8 Science Inquiryseegongsik /au

Communicating Findings and Arguments: a skill companion

A small set of reusable sheets that grow one inquiry skill: shaping the same finding or argument for different purposes and readers. Students choose the text type, the register (formal, plain or chatty) and the features each reader needs, rewrite sentences for a new audience, and fix a graph that misleads. Print the scaffolds once and slot them into the science lessons you already teach.

AC9S8I08
write and create texts to communicate ideas, findings and arguments for specific purposes and audiences, including selection of appropriate language and text features, using digital tools as appropriate

What a skill companion is

Inquiry skills are not a topic of their own. They grow inside the science units a class teaches all year, wherever results are shared: a cell poster, a talk to younger students, an earthquake report, a rock-cycle diagram, a short video or a newsletter letter. So this pack is not a full term of lessons. It is three reusable scaffolds, a map of where they fit, and a short stand-alone lesson for teaching the skill on its own first.

Start here: five minutes

  1. Read the pairing map on the next page: it shows which scaffold fits which science lesson.
  2. Print the planner whenever students share results, and the register and graph sheet before any text is handed in.
  3. Cut out the cards once. They are reused all year, and the blank cards fit any topic.
  4. Open the free interactive unit on your board when you want a worked example of the skill.
  5. Run the one-page mini-lesson first if you want to teach the skill before folding it into a topic.

The step up from Year 7

In Year 7 students wrote for a reader and fixed an unclear draft. In Year 8 the same finding goes to several readers at once, and each text has to carry an argument, not just a result: a lab report for a teacher, an infographic for the public, a talk for younger students. Students choose the register and features on purpose, keep the numbers honest in every version (a graph axis that skips zero can make a small difference look huge), and pick digital tools that suit the text.

On the board
This pack is the printable half of a free interactive unit. On screen, students switch “Show the trend that carries the argument” between “Bar chart”, “Table” and “Line graph”, pick each option in “Choose the text type, and name its audience”, sort choices with “Fits the purpose” and “Does not fit” in “Which choices fit the report’s purpose?”, and step through “How the argument was refined as it was shared”.
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Aligned to the Australian Curriculum V9 (AC9S8I08). This pack is original material from seegongsik, independently produced and not endorsed by ACARA. Curriculum content descriptors are (c) ACARA, licensed under CC BY 4.0. Free to print and use in class.
Where the skill fitsPairing map

Slot the skill into your science lessons

Every Year 8 topic produces a finding worth sharing. This map shows a finding in each topic, an audience and text type, the feature that matters most for that reader, and which scaffold to reach for.

When you teachA finding to shareAudience and text typeThe feature that matters mostScaffold
Cells: the Basic Units of Life (AC9S8U01)Plant cells have a wall and chloroplasts; animal cells do notA labelled comparison poster for the corridorTwo drawings side by side, labels lined up, one caption eachPlanner
Cells, Tissues and Organ Systems (AC9S8U02)Heart rate recovers in a few minutes after exerciseA short talk to a Year 5 classA demonstration they can join: counting their own pulsePlanner, then the cards
Plate Tectonics (AC9S8U03)Earthquakes thin out with distance from the boundaryA lab report for the teacher, and an infographic for the publicA labelled line graph in one; a single headline in the otherPlanner
The Rock Cycle (AC9S8U04)Sedimentary, igneous and metamorphic rocks form in different waysA flow diagram for revisionArrows labelled with the process, not just the rock namesRegister and graph sheet
Kinetic and Potential Energy (AC9S8U05)A higher drop gives a faster ball at the bottomA one-minute video explanationA slow-motion clip with the heights markedPlanner, then the cards
Elements, Compounds and Mixtures (AC9S8U06)Tap water is a mixtureA letter to the school newsletterPlain words, one figure from the water report, citedRegister and graph sheet
Physical and Chemical Changes (AC9S8U07)The vinegar reaction takes in energyA results section with a graphAn honest graph: axes from zero, units, a titleThe mini-lesson, then the register and graph sheet
Any science topicAny finding or argumentThe reader who needs itThe feature that reader needs mostPlanner first

The three moves, and the picture that backs each one

When you want a worked example on the board, open the interactive unit and use the picture that matches the move.

How the scaffolds build the skill

The planner turns one finding into three texts, deciding the purpose, register, features, what to leave out and the digital tool for each. The register and graph sheet rewrites sentences for a new reader and fixes a bar chart whose cut axis exaggerates a small difference. The cards sort features into the lab report, the infographic and the talk.

Scaffold 1 · PlannerOne per student

One finding, three texts

NameClassDate

The same finding becomes a different text for each reader. Decide who it is for and what they need to do with it, then choose the register, the features and what to leave out.

The finding

Earthquakes recorded in one year by stations at five distances from a plate boundary.

Distance (km)04080120160
Earthquakes per year210145884117

A. Plan the three texts

Lab report for the teacherInfographic for the publicTalk to a Year 5 class
Purpose
Register (formal, plain or chatty)
Must include
Leave out
Digital tool

B. Write the key lines

The infographic headline (10 words or fewer):
The report’s results sentence, with numbers:
How you would open the talk:
Scaffold 2 · Register and graphOne per student

The right words, and an honest graph

NameClassDate

Register is the kind of language a text uses: formal for a report, plain for the public, chatty for a talk. Whatever the register, the numbers must stay honest, and so must the graph.

A. Rewrite for the reader

The draftRewrite itYour version
Basically the quakes went way down the further out we went.Formal, for the lab report
Seismicity attenuates with increasing epicentral distance from the plate margin.Plain, for the public
Lots of quakes happened near the boundary.Precise, with numbers

B. Fix the graph

A newsletter printed this graph of earthquakes in a year at two towns: Town P had 120 and Town Q had 110.

105110115120125Town PTown Qnumber
Problem 1:
Problem 2:
Problem 3:
What a reader might wrongly think:
How tall should the taller bar look, compared with the other?
Write the title the fixed graph should have:
Scaffold 3 · Feature cards (cut out)Reuse all year

Report, infographic, or talk?

Cut out the cards. Lay down the three grey heading cards, then sort the features into the text that needs them most. Some could fit two texts: decide which reader needs it more, and say why.

Lab reportFor a teacher to check: formal, complete, and repeatable.Heading
InfographicFor the public walking past: one idea, seen in seconds.Heading
Talk to Year 5For younger listeners: plain words, things to see and do.Heading
One bold headline: “Live near a plate edge? Expect more shaking.”Card A
Asking the audience: “Who has felt a truck rumble past the house?”Card B
Shaking a tray of sand to show what the ground doesCard C
A method that another class could repeat, step by stepCard D
A section on errors and limitationsCard E
A one-line source credit in small print along the bottomCard F
The sentence: “Earthquakes per year decreased as distance from the boundary increased.”Card G
The source of the data, cited in the textCard H
Saying the plates are like giant puzzle pieces that push and rubCard I
A simple map with an icon for each townCard J
A single large trend line with two points labelledCard K
A results table with the units in the column headingsCard L
A feature for your own text:
Write your own
A feature for your own text:
Write your own
A feature for your own text:
Write your own

Teacher note: the piles are not the same size. The answer sheet lists which card is which, and why.

Mini-lesson · Teacher planAbout 30 minutes

One finding, two readers

Use this stand-alone lesson to teach the skill on its own, before you fold it into a science topic. Pairs fold a sheet of paper in half. One side becomes a results section for a teacher, the other an infographic for people walking past, both from the same earthquake data. Another pair then checks each side against its reader.

We are learning to

Success criteria

You need

Lesson flow (about 30 minutes)

5 minWhich form?
Show the board (see the box).

Ask: “Which view makes the argument easiest to see, and why that one?”

15 minTwo sides
Pairs plan both texts on scaffold 1, then make them: a labelled graph and a formal results sentence on one side, a headline and one simple visual on the other.

Ask: “What did you leave off the infographic, and why is that all right?”

5 minSwap and check
Pairs swap and check each side: does it suit its reader, and do both sides give the same numbers?

Ask: “Would a teacher trust the results side? Would a passer-by stop for the infographic?”

5 minSort the cards
Tables sort the cards under the three heading cards.

Ask: “Card F credits the source on the infographic. Why does even a poster need a source?”

Running it shorter? Make only the infographic side, and write the results side in your next science lesson.

On the board
For a worked example, open the unit and switch “Show the trend that carries the argument” from “Bar chart” to “Line graph”. Then pick each option in “Choose the text type, and name its audience” and compare what each gains and costs.
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Watch for these ideas

Make it easier, make it bigger

Answers and look-fors

The next sheet has a model plan, the rewrites, the graph problems, the card key and a quick three-level guide.

Answers · For the teacherModel responses

Answers and look-fors

Planner: a model plan

Lab report for the teacherInfographic for the publicTalk to a Year 5 class
PurposeTo let the teacher judge the method and the argumentTo give a passer-by the main idea in secondsTo help young listeners picture why the ground shakes
Register (formal, plain or chatty)FormalPlainChatty, with questions
Must includeMethod, results table, labelled line graph, cited source, limitsHeadline, one trend line, a small map, a source creditA shaking demonstration, a comparison they know, one big number
Leave outSlang, jokesThe method, the full tableTechnical words, long numbers
Digital toolA spreadsheet for the graph; a word processorA poster or slide toolSlides with one picture each, or none

B, for example: “Live near a plate edge? Expect more shaking.” Results: “The station at the boundary recorded 210 earthquakes in a year; the count fell at every distance, to 17 at 160 km, about 12 times fewer.” Talk: “Who has felt a truck rumble past the house? Today we find out where the ground shakes most.”

Register and graph

TaskA version at standard
Formal, for the lab reportThe number of earthquakes recorded each year decreased as distance from the plate boundary increased.
Plain, for the publicThe further a town is from the edge of the plate, the fewer earthquakes it has.
Precise, with numbersThe station at the boundary recorded 210 earthquakes in a year, about 12 times as many as the station 160 km away.

B. Problems: the axis starts at 105, not 0, so the 120 bar looks 3 times as tall as the 110 bar when it is only 1.09 times as big; there is no title; the axis says “number” but not of what, or in what time. A reader might think Town P has about three times the earthquakes. Fixed: start the axis at 0, so the bars look nearly equal. Title: “Earthquakes recorded in one year at two towns”.

Feature cards

CardFeatureTextWhy
AOne bold headline: “Live near a plate edge? Expect more shaking.”InfographicCatches a passer-by with the one idea.
BAsking the audience: “Who has felt a truck rumble past the house?”Talk to Year 5Links shaking to something young listeners know.
CShaking a tray of sand to show what the ground doesTalk to Year 5Something to see, for listeners who cannot read a graph yet.
DA method that another class could repeat, step by stepLab reportA teacher needs to judge and repeat the investigation.
EA section on errors and limitationsLab reportShows how far the finding can be trusted.
FA one-line source credit in small print along the bottomInfographicCredits the data without crowding the one idea.
GThe sentence: “Earthquakes per year decreased as distance from the boundary increased.”Lab reportFormal and precise.
HThe source of the data, cited in the textLab reportLets the teacher check where the data came from.
ISaying the plates are like giant puzzle pieces that push and rubTalk to Year 5A comparison young listeners can picture.
JA simple map with an icon for each townInfographicShows where at a glance.
KA single large trend line with two points labelledInfographicThe trend in seconds, without a full table.
LA results table with the units in the column headingsLab reportEvery value, ready to check.

A quick three-level guide

MoveWorking towardsAt standardBeyond
Fit the text to the readerwrites every text the same waychooses the text type, register and features each reader needsexplains what each text leaves out, and why
Keep it honestchanges the finding or the numbers to suit a textgives the same finding and numbers in every versionspots and fixes a misleading graph or headline
Use features and toolsadds features as decorationuses headings, labelled graphs and citations where they help the readerchooses a digital tool for what the text needs

A student at standard shapes the same honest finding for different readers, with the register and features each needs. The skill grows all year, so keep the scaffolds coming back whenever results are shared.