Communicating Findings and Arguments: a skill companion
A small set of reusable sheets that grow one inquiry skill: shaping the same finding or argument for different purposes and readers. Students choose the text type, the register (formal, plain or chatty) and the features each reader needs, rewrite sentences for a new audience, and fix a graph that misleads. Print the scaffolds once and slot them into the science lessons you already teach.
What a skill companion is
Inquiry skills are not a topic of their own. They grow inside the science units a class teaches all year, wherever results are shared: a cell poster, a talk to younger students, an earthquake report, a rock-cycle diagram, a short video or a newsletter letter. So this pack is not a full term of lessons. It is three reusable scaffolds, a map of where they fit, and a short stand-alone lesson for teaching the skill on its own first.
Start here: five minutes
- Read the pairing map on the next page: it shows which scaffold fits which science lesson.
- Print the planner whenever students share results, and the register and graph sheet before any text is handed in.
- Cut out the cards once. They are reused all year, and the blank cards fit any topic.
- Open the free interactive unit on your board when you want a worked example of the skill.
- Run the one-page mini-lesson first if you want to teach the skill before folding it into a topic.
The step up from Year 7
In Year 7 students wrote for a reader and fixed an unclear draft. In Year 8 the same finding goes to several readers at once, and each text has to carry an argument, not just a result: a lab report for a teacher, an infographic for the public, a talk for younger students. Students choose the register and features on purpose, keep the numbers honest in every version (a graph axis that skips zero can make a small difference look huge), and pick digital tools that suit the text.
Slot the skill into your science lessons
Every Year 8 topic produces a finding worth sharing. This map shows a finding in each topic, an audience and text type, the feature that matters most for that reader, and which scaffold to reach for.
| When you teach | A finding to share | Audience and text type | The feature that matters most | Scaffold |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Cells: the Basic Units of Life (AC9S8U01) | Plant cells have a wall and chloroplasts; animal cells do not | A labelled comparison poster for the corridor | Two drawings side by side, labels lined up, one caption each | Planner |
| Cells, Tissues and Organ Systems (AC9S8U02) | Heart rate recovers in a few minutes after exercise | A short talk to a Year 5 class | A demonstration they can join: counting their own pulse | Planner, then the cards |
| Plate Tectonics (AC9S8U03) | Earthquakes thin out with distance from the boundary | A lab report for the teacher, and an infographic for the public | A labelled line graph in one; a single headline in the other | Planner |
| The Rock Cycle (AC9S8U04) | Sedimentary, igneous and metamorphic rocks form in different ways | A flow diagram for revision | Arrows labelled with the process, not just the rock names | Register and graph sheet |
| Kinetic and Potential Energy (AC9S8U05) | A higher drop gives a faster ball at the bottom | A one-minute video explanation | A slow-motion clip with the heights marked | Planner, then the cards |
| Elements, Compounds and Mixtures (AC9S8U06) | Tap water is a mixture | A letter to the school newsletter | Plain words, one figure from the water report, cited | Register and graph sheet |
| Physical and Chemical Changes (AC9S8U07) | The vinegar reaction takes in energy | A results section with a graph | An honest graph: axes from zero, units, a title | The mini-lesson, then the register and graph sheet |
| Any science topic | Any finding or argument | The reader who needs it | The feature that reader needs most | Planner first |
The three moves, and the picture that backs each one
When you want a worked example on the board, open the interactive unit and use the picture that matches the move.
- Choose the form that carries the argument: “Show the trend that carries the argument”.
- Match the text type to its audience: “Choose the text type, and name its audience”.
- Check each feature against the purpose: “Which choices fit the report’s purpose?”.
How the scaffolds build the skill
The planner turns one finding into three texts, deciding the purpose, register, features, what to leave out and the digital tool for each. The register and graph sheet rewrites sentences for a new reader and fixes a bar chart whose cut axis exaggerates a small difference. The cards sort features into the lab report, the infographic and the talk.
One finding, three texts
The same finding becomes a different text for each reader. Decide who it is for and what they need to do with it, then choose the register, the features and what to leave out.
The finding
Earthquakes recorded in one year by stations at five distances from a plate boundary.
| Distance (km) | 0 | 40 | 80 | 120 | 160 |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Earthquakes per year | 210 | 145 | 88 | 41 | 17 |
A. Plan the three texts
| Lab report for the teacher | Infographic for the public | Talk to a Year 5 class | |
|---|---|---|---|
| Purpose | |||
| Register (formal, plain or chatty) | |||
| Must include | |||
| Leave out | |||
| Digital tool |
B. Write the key lines
The right words, and an honest graph
Register is the kind of language a text uses: formal for a report, plain for the public, chatty for a talk. Whatever the register, the numbers must stay honest, and so must the graph.
A. Rewrite for the reader
| The draft | Rewrite it | Your version |
|---|---|---|
| Basically the quakes went way down the further out we went. | Formal, for the lab report | |
| Seismicity attenuates with increasing epicentral distance from the plate margin. | Plain, for the public | |
| Lots of quakes happened near the boundary. | Precise, with numbers |
B. Fix the graph
A newsletter printed this graph of earthquakes in a year at two towns: Town P had 120 and Town Q had 110.
Report, infographic, or talk?
Cut out the cards. Lay down the three grey heading cards, then sort the features into the text that needs them most. Some could fit two texts: decide which reader needs it more, and say why.
Teacher note: the piles are not the same size. The answer sheet lists which card is which, and why.
One finding, two readers
Use this stand-alone lesson to teach the skill on its own, before you fold it into a science topic. Pairs fold a sheet of paper in half. One side becomes a results section for a teacher, the other an infographic for people walking past, both from the same earthquake data. Another pair then checks each side against its reader.
We are learning to
- choose the register and features a reader needs,
- keep the finding and the numbers honest in every version,
- check a text against its purpose and audience.
Success criteria
- A teacher could check my results side, and a passer-by could get my infographic in seconds.
- Both sides tell the same finding, with the same numbers.
You need
- a sheet of paper, a ruler and coloured pencils per pair (or a slide or poster tool on a device),
- the planner (scaffold 1), one per student, and the cards from scaffold 3, one set per table.
Lesson flow (about 30 minutes)
| 5 min | Which form? Show the board (see the box). Ask: “Which view makes the argument easiest to see, and why that one?” |
| 15 min | Two sides Pairs plan both texts on scaffold 1, then make them: a labelled graph and a formal results sentence on one side, a headline and one simple visual on the other. Ask: “What did you leave off the infographic, and why is that all right?” |
| 5 min | Swap and check Pairs swap and check each side: does it suit its reader, and do both sides give the same numbers? Ask: “Would a teacher trust the results side? Would a passer-by stop for the infographic?” |
| 5 min | Sort the cards Tables sort the cards under the three heading cards. Ask: “Card F credits the source on the infographic. Why does even a poster need a source?” |
Running it shorter? Make only the infographic side, and write the results side in your next science lesson.
Watch for these ideas
- Shrinking the report into the infographic, with every number and no headline.
- Changing the finding to make the poster more exciting.
- A graph with no title, no units, or an axis that skips zero.
Make it easier, make it bigger
- Easier: give the headline frame “Closer to the ..., more ...” and a ready-drawn pair of axes for the results side.
- Bigger: add a third version, a 30-second talk for a Year 5 class, and say what changed and why.
Answers and look-fors
The next sheet has a model plan, the rewrites, the graph problems, the card key and a quick three-level guide.
Answers and look-fors
Planner: a model plan
| Lab report for the teacher | Infographic for the public | Talk to a Year 5 class | |
|---|---|---|---|
| Purpose | To let the teacher judge the method and the argument | To give a passer-by the main idea in seconds | To help young listeners picture why the ground shakes |
| Register (formal, plain or chatty) | Formal | Plain | Chatty, with questions |
| Must include | Method, results table, labelled line graph, cited source, limits | Headline, one trend line, a small map, a source credit | A shaking demonstration, a comparison they know, one big number |
| Leave out | Slang, jokes | The method, the full table | Technical words, long numbers |
| Digital tool | A spreadsheet for the graph; a word processor | A poster or slide tool | Slides with one picture each, or none |
B, for example: “Live near a plate edge? Expect more shaking.” Results: “The station at the boundary recorded 210 earthquakes in a year; the count fell at every distance, to 17 at 160 km, about 12 times fewer.” Talk: “Who has felt a truck rumble past the house? Today we find out where the ground shakes most.”
Register and graph
| Task | A version at standard |
|---|---|
| Formal, for the lab report | The number of earthquakes recorded each year decreased as distance from the plate boundary increased. |
| Plain, for the public | The further a town is from the edge of the plate, the fewer earthquakes it has. |
| Precise, with numbers | The station at the boundary recorded 210 earthquakes in a year, about 12 times as many as the station 160 km away. |
B. Problems: the axis starts at 105, not 0, so the 120 bar looks 3 times as tall as the 110 bar when it is only 1.09 times as big; there is no title; the axis says “number” but not of what, or in what time. A reader might think Town P has about three times the earthquakes. Fixed: start the axis at 0, so the bars look nearly equal. Title: “Earthquakes recorded in one year at two towns”.
Feature cards
| Card | Feature | Text | Why |
|---|---|---|---|
| A | One bold headline: “Live near a plate edge? Expect more shaking.” | Infographic | Catches a passer-by with the one idea. |
| B | Asking the audience: “Who has felt a truck rumble past the house?” | Talk to Year 5 | Links shaking to something young listeners know. |
| C | Shaking a tray of sand to show what the ground does | Talk to Year 5 | Something to see, for listeners who cannot read a graph yet. |
| D | A method that another class could repeat, step by step | Lab report | A teacher needs to judge and repeat the investigation. |
| E | A section on errors and limitations | Lab report | Shows how far the finding can be trusted. |
| F | A one-line source credit in small print along the bottom | Infographic | Credits the data without crowding the one idea. |
| G | The sentence: “Earthquakes per year decreased as distance from the boundary increased.” | Lab report | Formal and precise. |
| H | The source of the data, cited in the text | Lab report | Lets the teacher check where the data came from. |
| I | Saying the plates are like giant puzzle pieces that push and rub | Talk to Year 5 | A comparison young listeners can picture. |
| J | A simple map with an icon for each town | Infographic | Shows where at a glance. |
| K | A single large trend line with two points labelled | Infographic | The trend in seconds, without a full table. |
| L | A results table with the units in the column headings | Lab report | Every value, ready to check. |
A quick three-level guide
| Move | Working towards | At standard | Beyond |
|---|---|---|---|
| Fit the text to the reader | writes every text the same way | chooses the text type, register and features each reader needs | explains what each text leaves out, and why |
| Keep it honest | changes the finding or the numbers to suit a text | gives the same finding and numbers in every version | spots and fixes a misleading graph or headline |
| Use features and tools | adds features as decoration | uses headings, labelled graphs and citations where they help the reader | chooses a digital tool for what the text needs |
A student at standard shapes the same honest finding for different readers, with the register and features each needs. The skill grows all year, so keep the scaffolds coming back whenever results are shared.